Project 1: Sense of Place
Major suggestions were:
More cut scenes, car scene too long, needs more, "what happens" at the ending.
I agree that the car scene was too long and there needed to be more cut scenes to establish a pattern. I disagree with giving the audience a closed ending since "Sense of Place" is an unresolved situation for me.
After studying the critiques I learned alot can be said in how and what's filmed. And, that I have to pay close attention to how long my scenes are.
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